To ptathuk, Thank you for your comment - it's nice to see that you're taking a kind of detailed interest. Unfortunately, the internal logic of the story means that John can't be wearing his collar (as you'll see when I upload the next picture). I had him wearing it in the 3rd picture on the basis that that was him "now" rather than "at the time of the events described", but on second thoughts, it would probably be better to remove the collar from that picture as well....
Sorry to 'jump the gun'. Love the artwork; love the story. I eagerly await both the illustrations and episode 3. I appreciate the amount of work that goes into high quality animation.
Another home run! Definitely seeing this incorporated in your next installment of LLC....perhaps more interaction with Sebastian on Susan's part with John "growing" credits unwittingly for Susan.
Thanks for your comment! I'm currently in the process of producing an "Episode 0" (giving more background on LLP), and am also doing some work on Episode 3. The content will get more explicit as the story progresses. I've got more ideas than I could possibly produce as CG animations, so I'll do some as comics, and possibly some as 2D animations (like Episode 1 was).
It would be spectacular if you could do a 'webisode' collection that can play as an entire movie. I think the mix of 2D and 3D animation would add to the experience. Both episode 1 and 2 are exactly right for this.
That sounds like an interesting idea. I could easily edit the episodes into one movie file and/or make them available for download. Did you have any other way in mind for making them into a collection?
Keeping them as separate files is always an option, as well. That way, they remain quicker to download. Maybe collect three of four together into an Act? After all, there are chapters on DVDs.
The comic above can remain a 2D, but with the text replaced with a voice-over? This would fill in the gaps of the story, between episodes.
I would recommend you do them in whatever order you like, as your creativity is central to the whole thing. Only collect an 'Act' together, once you have it.
Thank you for your suggestions. They reminded me that there is a relatively new software called MotionArtist that allows you to mix animations and semi-animated/still comic illustrations into a kind of Web-comic (similar to what you could do with Flash, only easier to use). Maybe that would be worth investigating.
For now, I'm creating characters for the next 3D animation. I really enjoy doing 3D stuff, but it's a long process, so - whilst the 3D work is progressing - I'd also like to do another comic or 2D animation, maybe one that follows a different LLP "story arc".
I think your choice of animation tool would enhance the story. Making a change would help to inform the viewer that they were looking at a different story arc, from the off. Connection panels, like in a silent move, might also place the next scene in context.
I would hope you enjoy producing all that you do. As much as you receive pressure to produce, my vote would always be to see what you enjoy producing the most. For example, I would love to see John get his collar, and his reaction to it. But you are the author.
Thank you for your very sensible and considerate comments. Even though I'm only doing all of this for fun, its easy for it to turn by slow degrees - in one's own mind - into some kind of obligation.
Anyway, I think I've come to a decision. I'm going to continue the Susan & John story as 3D animations, and produce other story arcs/characters as 2D animations (+ maybe some short comics or single illustrations). Although 3D animations can be more impressive, I think 2D animation makes it easier to create characters that are more emotionally expressive. What's more, I suspect that - in some cases - a 2D animation is not very much more work than producing the equivalent comic.
I have a definite story line/skit in mind. It consists of a "YouTube friendly" section that isn't too explicit, plus an explicit extra scene. I plan to upload the first part to YouTube, and the "first part + extra scene" version to this blog.
Anyway, thanks again for your support and helpful comments.
I really like the idea of John not knowing what his wife is up to, by that I mean not being able to work out Susans mixed messages. I find it intensely erotic when a beautiful woman such as susan says she loves him truthfully but yet is still playing around while she goes through her "dilemma". I think the idea of John growing credits unwittingly is a good one. It might be a good twist that certain acts require more credits than other acts. Perhaps there also might be an element of punishment for john at some point. Susan could have access to an electroshocker that only she knows about to spur john on to make certain choices with regards to his arousal level or simply to heighten her own arousal if she doesn't want him enjoying things too much.
Thank you for your comments. Now I think about it, LLP is actually a fantasy that has been evolving in my mind over a period of years to include the particular things that turn me on; I was fantasizing about it long before I ever thought of producing comics or animations about it. Although, its not a linear story, the elements involved have become quite well defined - and I can assure you that the idea of "having to generate credits" is central to the "power dynamic" running through the LLP universe, and dictates the future course of the story!
I was one of the earliest admirers and commentators on your blog and YouTube. Glad to see others have joined in; I know it gives YOU the incentive to continue your work. Eventually, I see the John and Susan/Sebastian series being more confined to your blog because of the eventual explicit storyline and animations. Looking forward to the Susan and Sebastian scenes that are inevitable....love to see his personality developed.
Thank you for your comment. Your continuing interest is greatly appreciated!
Like you, I have been thinking that, as the series gets more explicit, there will be some material that I will only be able to upload to my blog. In some cases, I might upload a 'PG' rated version to YouTube, and an explicit version to the blog.
This is a great story. I love seeing John's feelings here at the beginning of his visit in the LLP. The contrast with Peter (who has come to accept and enjoy his role) heightens our sense of John's virginity to this kind of sexual anxiety and humiliation.
I'd love to see a follow up that comes after John gets his collar. Peter could take John to a husband's club. John could be shocked when Peter nonchalantly strips off his bodysuit, but Peter would explain that clothes aren't allowed in the club but that it's "no big deal" since only guys are inside and therefore kindof like a locker room. At the club, Peter could show John the monitors, including the channel where Susan is being fucked by Sebastian. Peter would then get super aroused by John's humiliation (since he gets off on seeing John's wife fucked and John humiliated). Then, despite John's abject humiliation at seeing his his wife fucked by a black stud and at having his only friend get off on it, his own collar would give away the fact that he's actually super aroused by the whole situation. Then, when Peter points this out, it humiliates John even more.
i love the idea of having a "PG" version on youtube, maybe even some exclusive youtube content. Subtle interracial cuck messages with subliminals, posing as "innocent" ads or something.
Shouldn't John be wearing his collar?
ReplyDeleteTo ptathuk,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment - it's nice to see that you're taking a kind of detailed interest. Unfortunately, the internal logic of the story means that John can't be wearing his collar (as you'll see when I upload the next picture). I had him wearing it in the 3rd picture on the basis that that was him "now" rather than "at the time of the events described", but on second thoughts, it would probably be better to remove the collar from that picture as well....
Anyway, thanks and stay tuned!
Sorry to 'jump the gun'. Love the artwork; love the story. I eagerly await both the illustrations and episode 3. I appreciate the amount of work that goes into high quality animation.
ReplyDeleteWill definitely stay tuned!
ptathuk
Another home run! Definitely seeing this incorporated in your next installment of LLC....perhaps more interaction with Sebastian on Susan's part with John "growing" credits unwittingly for Susan.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment! I'm currently in the process of producing an "Episode 0" (giving more background on LLP), and am also doing some work on Episode 3. The content will get more explicit as the story progresses. I've got more ideas than I could possibly produce as CG animations, so I'll do some as comics, and possibly some as 2D animations (like Episode 1 was).
DeleteIt would be spectacular if you could do a 'webisode' collection that can play as an entire movie. I think the mix of 2D and 3D animation would add to the experience. Both episode 1 and 2 are exactly right for this.
ReplyDeleteptathuk
That sounds like an interesting idea. I could easily edit the episodes into one movie file and/or make them available for download. Did you have any other way in mind for making them into a collection?
DeleteKeeping them as separate files is always an option, as well. That way, they remain quicker to download. Maybe collect three of four together into an Act? After all, there are chapters on DVDs.
ReplyDeleteThe comic above can remain a 2D, but with the text replaced with a voice-over? This would fill in the gaps of the story, between episodes.
I would recommend you do them in whatever order you like, as your creativity is central to the whole thing. Only collect an 'Act' together, once you have it.
I can't wait for the next scene.
ptathuk
Thank you for your suggestions. They reminded me that there is a relatively new software called MotionArtist that allows you to mix animations and semi-animated/still comic illustrations into a kind of Web-comic (similar to what you could do with Flash, only easier to use). Maybe that would be worth investigating.
DeleteFor now, I'm creating characters for the next 3D animation. I really enjoy doing 3D stuff, but it's a long process, so - whilst the 3D work is progressing - I'd also like to do another comic or 2D animation, maybe one that follows a different LLP "story arc".
Lamivex,
DeleteI think your choice of animation tool would enhance the story. Making a change would help to inform the viewer that they were looking at a different story arc, from the off. Connection panels, like in a silent move, might also place the next scene in context.
I would hope you enjoy producing all that you do. As much as you receive pressure to produce, my vote would always be to see what you enjoy producing the most. For example, I would love to see John get his collar, and his reaction to it. But you are the author.
Looking forward to what you will give us next.
ptathuk
Thank you for your very sensible and considerate comments. Even though I'm only doing all of this for fun, its easy for it to turn by slow degrees - in one's own mind - into some kind of obligation.
DeleteAnyway, I think I've come to a decision. I'm going to continue the Susan & John story as 3D animations, and produce other story arcs/characters as 2D animations (+ maybe some short comics or single illustrations). Although 3D animations can be more impressive, I think 2D animation makes it easier to create characters that are more emotionally expressive. What's more, I suspect that - in some cases - a 2D animation is not very much more work than producing the equivalent comic.
I have a definite story line/skit in mind. It consists of a "YouTube friendly" section that isn't too explicit, plus an explicit extra scene. I plan to upload the first part to YouTube, and the "first part + extra scene" version to this blog.
Anyway, thanks again for your support and helpful comments.
I really like the idea of John not knowing what his wife is up to, by that I mean not being able to work out Susans mixed messages. I find it intensely erotic when a beautiful woman such as susan says she loves him truthfully but yet is still playing around while she goes through her "dilemma". I think the idea of John growing credits unwittingly is a good one. It might be a good twist that certain acts require more credits than other acts. Perhaps there also might be an element of punishment for john at some point. Susan could have access to an electroshocker that only she knows about to spur john on to make certain choices with regards to his arousal level or simply to heighten her own arousal if she doesn't want him enjoying things too much.
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DeleteThank you for your comments. Now I think about it, LLP is actually a fantasy that has been evolving in my mind over a period of years to include the particular things that turn me on; I was fantasizing about it long before I ever thought of producing comics or animations about it. Although, its not a linear story, the elements involved have become quite well defined - and I can assure you that the idea of "having to generate credits" is central to the "power dynamic" running through the LLP universe, and dictates the future course of the story!
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ReplyDeleteI was one of the earliest admirers and commentators on your blog and YouTube. Glad to see others have joined in; I know it gives YOU the incentive to continue your work. Eventually, I see the John and Susan/Sebastian series being more confined to your blog because of the eventual explicit storyline and animations. Looking forward to the Susan and Sebastian scenes that are inevitable....love to see his personality developed.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment. Your continuing interest is greatly appreciated!
DeleteLike you, I have been thinking that, as the series gets more explicit, there will be some material that I will only be able to upload to my blog. In some cases, I might upload a 'PG' rated version to YouTube, and an explicit version to the blog.
This is a great story. I love seeing John's feelings here at the beginning of his visit in the LLP. The contrast with Peter (who has come to accept and enjoy his role) heightens our sense of John's virginity to this kind of sexual anxiety and humiliation.
ReplyDeleteI'd love to see a follow up that comes after John gets his collar. Peter could take John to a husband's club. John could be shocked when Peter nonchalantly strips off his bodysuit, but Peter would explain that clothes aren't allowed in the club but that it's "no big deal" since only guys are inside and therefore kindof like a locker room. At the club, Peter could show John the monitors, including the channel where Susan is being fucked by Sebastian. Peter would then get super aroused by John's humiliation (since he gets off on seeing John's wife fucked and John humiliated). Then, despite John's abject humiliation at seeing his his wife fucked by a black stud and at having his only friend get off on it, his own collar would give away the fact that he's actually super aroused by the whole situation. Then, when Peter points this out, it humiliates John even more.
It's great to see on your site that my ideas have actually inspired some of your own work. I'll continue to watch with interest!
Deletei love the idea of having a "PG" version on youtube, maybe even some exclusive youtube content. Subtle interracial cuck messages with subliminals, posing as "innocent" ads or something.
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