I've finally finished my 'motion comic' project. My original plan was to implement it as a flash animation, but I ended up doing it in the form of a video file, since a video is more straightforward and gives more freedom with regard to the animation tools I used.
I really enjoyed this one! As much as I like the animated series, the motion comic was really good! I'd love to see more of the fun the women are having, their pamplets and choices. The body mod in the nipple enhacment was hot and I wonder what else a lady could choose in her fantasy, or a trip to that fetish clothing shop and it's tech. Once again great motion comic can't wait for more!
Also looking forward to Susan's continuing cuckolding of John with Sebastian. This next part has got to be sexsational. This comic was a nice appetizer...now for the main course!
When are we going to see Susan and John? Any teasers or hints as to what we can expect? I would personally love to see an actual de-balling sequence occur!
Brilliant animation and great story telling...love the series - can't wait to see more. It must be a tremendous amount of work to complete an episode. You have many fans who appreciate your work.
Thank you for all your kind comments! I actually found the artwork quite arduous to produce (which is one of the reasons I suspended work on it for a while and did the "Nipple Enhancement" CG animation). However, having finished it, I can see that's its quite an effective way of telling a story, and it allows me to fully animate the "highlights" without having to do too much work on the buildup. In particular, using speech bubbles rather than text to speech voices is a time saver (and might even be more effective, since it's probably better to imagine the voice you want than to actually hear a synthetic voice which is not really natural or satisfactory). I like experimenting with different media, but I'm also searching for a well balanced way of telling the story that keeps the excitement without having to expend too much effort in places where it's not so important.
I've got no shortage of ideas about LLP. In fact, there are some large elements of the fantasy that I haven't touched on yet. The main problem is presenting them in a satisfactory way.
@J man - I'm not sure why you can't play the video either here or on YouTube. Perhaps there's some problem with your browser settings etc. It's probably worth searching on Google to see if other people have had similar problems playing videos. However, one thing I can say is that you won't find it by searching YouTube or looking on my YouTube channel. That's because I uploaded it as an 'unlisted' video which doesn't come up on searches. Had I uploaded it as a public video (or even as 'age restricted') the chances are that it would have been deleted as 'inappropriate content' before very long.
@ZeoRanger4 - I have a definite script for the next Susan & John episode, but the time it takes to render out the animation is a pain, and really slows down the iterations leading to the final version. For that reason, I've decided to look into rendering using Unreal Engine 4. It's real time rendering engine is of very good quality, and (although I don't actually have to render in real time), it's naturally very fast. If I could render fast at reasonable quality, I think it would make the process of making CG animations much quicker and more enjoyable.
I dunno Lamivex, perhaps the motion comics is the way to go in the Susan and John series. You certainly can get a lot more information and scenes in this way, and it gives just enough movement to satisfy. Plus, I would imagine it cuts down the time on your part to create. Perhaps do an episode 3 and see what response you get.....I really enjoy the motion features myself. Especially the final scene...lol
That's worth thinking about. I've already done a lot of the planning for episode 3, so I'll do that as a CG animation. Then, depending on how much effort that eventually requires, I'll make a decision about the rest of the series.
I'm glad you enjoyed 'Pamphlets'. Please feel free to make suggestions regarding new scenarios. However, I have to say that I hardly have enough time to produce the stuff based on my own ideas!
I would love to see the details of the "Voluntary Adjustment Sex Credit Schemes." Why are some adjustments valued more than others? What makes for a particularly lucrative adjustment?
One idea I had regarding that is for the husband to go into a 'deballing world' and undergo a special training regime that allows him to work up to extremely high levels of excitement/frustration, thereby earning lots of credits for his wife. At that point, he undergoes adjustment (maybe in a special ceremony), with the sex credits his wife receives afterwards being determined by his 'earnings' during his last few days or weeks of 'manhood'. In other words, a kind of 'final salary' pension scheme!
Love your site. I found myself wanting to be Gerald in this video. Not really into the deballing but the whole video concept was very hot. Made me wish I was in his position.
This is so wonderfully dark and hilarious! Your stuff reminds me of early Dan Clowes. The world building you're doing is outstanding but I do feel that we need to see a scene where Diane meets up with Justin only to find him with another hotwife.
Diane: Hi Justin. Justin: Diane! Hey I want you to meet my boys Marcus 3 and Sebastien and this lovely lady is Rachel, our date for tonight. Diane: Wait I thought I was your date tonight? Justin: I'm sorry baby but you don't have enough sex credits for what we've got planned. Diane: I can get the credits! I'm good for it! Please Justin without you're man meat my life has no meaning! Justin: How do you think I feel? Your worthless hubby let us both down. (Diane begins to cry as Rachel leaves with Justin, Marcus 3 and Sebastien for what is sure to be the greatest night of her life.)
I think it would help your narrative if we were shown the consequences of a cuckold not earning enough sex credits for his hotwife.
Such a piece of art! I guess it takes you a lot of work creating the storylines and the animation, but it worth until the last second! You've catched the very essence of the cuckold life style!
I really enjoyed this one! As much as I like the animated series, the motion comic was really good! I'd love to see more of the fun the women are having, their pamplets and choices. The body mod in the nipple enhacment was hot and I wonder what else a lady could choose in her fantasy, or a trip to that fetish clothing shop and it's tech.
ReplyDeleteOnce again great motion comic can't wait for more!
Really enjoyable, loved it.
ReplyDeletePossibly the hottest post I've ever seen from a cucks POV. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteLamivex,
ReplyDeleteAnother wonderful addition to the world. Love the increasing lights on Gerald's collar. We just know what he'll choose. - And so does Diane!
Looking forward to more.
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Also looking forward to Susan's continuing cuckolding of John with Sebastian. This next part has got to be sexsational. This comic was a nice appetizer...now for the main course!
ReplyDeleteLoved it keep up the good work more please
ReplyDeleteHow come I cannot play it here or find it on you tube ?
ReplyDeleteWhen are we going to see Susan and John? Any teasers or hints as to what we can expect? I would personally love to see an actual de-balling sequence occur!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant animation and great story telling...love the series - can't wait to see more. It must be a tremendous amount of work to complete an episode. You have many fans who appreciate your work.
ReplyDeletethank you...
Thank you for all your kind comments! I actually found the artwork quite arduous to produce (which is one of the reasons I suspended work on it for a while and did the "Nipple Enhancement" CG animation). However, having finished it, I can see that's its quite an effective way of telling a story, and it allows me to fully animate the "highlights" without having to do too much work on the buildup. In particular, using speech bubbles rather than text to speech voices is a time saver (and might even be more effective, since it's probably better to imagine the voice you want than to actually hear a synthetic voice which is not really natural or satisfactory). I like experimenting with different media, but I'm also searching for a well balanced way of telling the story that keeps the excitement without having to expend too much effort in places where it's not so important.
ReplyDeleteI've got no shortage of ideas about LLP. In fact, there are some large elements of the fantasy that I haven't touched on yet. The main problem is presenting them in a satisfactory way.
@J man - I'm not sure why you can't play the video either here or on YouTube. Perhaps there's some problem with your browser settings etc. It's probably worth searching on Google to see if other people have had similar problems playing videos. However, one thing I can say is that you won't find it by searching YouTube or looking on my YouTube channel. That's because I uploaded it as an 'unlisted' video which doesn't come up on searches. Had I uploaded it as a public video (or even as 'age restricted') the chances are that it would have been deleted as 'inappropriate content' before very long.
@ZeoRanger4 - I have a definite script for the next Susan & John episode, but the time it takes to render out the animation is a pain, and really slows down the iterations leading to the final version. For that reason, I've decided to look into rendering using Unreal Engine 4. It's real time rendering engine is of very good quality, and (although I don't actually have to render in real time), it's naturally very fast. If I could render fast at reasonable quality, I think it would make the process of making CG animations much quicker and more enjoyable.
Regards.
I dunno Lamivex, perhaps the motion comics is the way to go in the Susan and John series. You certainly can get a lot more information and scenes in this way, and it gives just enough movement to satisfy. Plus, I would imagine it cuts down the time on your part to create. Perhaps do an episode 3 and see what response you get.....I really enjoy the motion features myself. Especially the final scene...lol
ReplyDeleteThat's worth thinking about. I've already done a lot of the planning for episode 3, so I'll do that as a CG animation. Then, depending on how much effort that eventually requires, I'll make a decision about the rest of the series.
DeleteGot it sorted out :)
ReplyDeleteGreat. Incidentally, I'm currently doing another 'motion comic' in the same style as 'Pamphlets'.
Deletethat black bulls balls were huge, I loved this episode.
ReplyDeleteCould you make a comic like this for me? Custom?
I'm glad you enjoyed 'Pamphlets'. Please feel free to make suggestions regarding new scenarios. However, I have to say that I hardly have enough time to produce the stuff based on my own ideas!
DeleteI would love to see the details of the "Voluntary Adjustment Sex Credit Schemes." Why are some adjustments valued more than others? What makes for a particularly lucrative adjustment?
ReplyDeleteOne idea I had regarding that is for the husband to go into a 'deballing world' and undergo a special training regime that allows him to work up to extremely high levels of excitement/frustration, thereby earning lots of credits for his wife. At that point, he undergoes adjustment (maybe in a special ceremony), with the sex credits his wife receives afterwards being determined by his 'earnings' during his last few days or weeks of 'manhood'. In other words, a kind of 'final salary' pension scheme!
DeleteHow is the new "motion comic" coming along?
ReplyDeleteLove your site. I found myself wanting to be Gerald in this video. Not really into the deballing but the whole video concept was very hot. Made me wish I was in his position.
ReplyDeleteThis is so wonderfully dark and hilarious! Your stuff reminds me of early Dan Clowes. The world building you're doing is outstanding but I do feel that we need to see a scene where Diane meets up with Justin only to find him with another hotwife.
ReplyDeleteDiane: Hi Justin.
Justin: Diane! Hey I want you to meet my boys Marcus 3 and Sebastien and this lovely lady is Rachel, our date for tonight.
Diane: Wait I thought I was your date tonight?
Justin: I'm sorry baby but you don't have enough sex credits for what we've got planned.
Diane: I can get the credits! I'm good for it! Please Justin without you're man meat my life has no meaning!
Justin: How do you think I feel? Your worthless hubby let us both down.
(Diane begins to cry as Rachel leaves with Justin, Marcus 3 and Sebastien for what is sure to be the greatest night of her life.)
I think it would help your narrative if we were shown the consequences of a cuckold not earning enough sex credits for his hotwife.
Such a piece of art! I guess it takes you a lot of work creating the storylines and the animation, but it worth until the last second! You've catched the very essence of the cuckold life style!
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