Sunday, April 12, 2015

Visitors: Frame 5


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  1. So Tony isn't wearing a collar, but has a yellow suit and mark on his forehead. How does this link up with his new "status" and this unfolding scenario?

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    1. I didn't explain it in the current story, but the yellow suit and forehead mark indicate 'advanced' rather than 'ordinary' guest status. I'll be explaining that in more detail in a future post.

      Regards.

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    2. Very interested to see all the new details - it really does help to create a more interesting world

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  2. Good to see the next frame. More teasing! Please keep going, or we'll vote to ship you off to LLC!

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    1. Thank you for your comment. I can well understand it looking like I'm deliberately drawing “Visitors” out, but I actually decided to do it this way as kind of enforcement (or at least incentive) to get me to finish the whole story. The fact is that I'm not very good at getting things finished, but since I know people are interested, and are waiting for the continuation, that's a big incentive to carry on and follow the story through to the end. Comments like yours are a big help with that.

      I'm also working on another project (in a format which I'm hoping will allow me to produce stories more efficiently and productively), and (barring any big technical problems) that should be finished and uploaded within the next two weeks.

      P.S. “Frame 6” is also in progress!

      Regards.

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    2. How is the new subject matter coming on? Is it turning out to be the help that you hoped it would? I'm pretty sure I speak for everyone who checks out your blog...Keep it coming! I love your work, and check here daily for updates, so I'm eagerly anticipating any and all installments you bring forth.

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  3. Love it! Is it just me, or does Her face look a little different? At first i thought it was the mouth but it's probably just the angle of the eyes. Still love the style!

    i hope She's just giving him false hope... or planning something even worse than what the regular penalty would be!

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  4. I think her nipples are a bit too "high" maybe, I prefer a bit more normal looking, big but normal. she's still sexy though

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  5. why too slow with the updates ? where is the next slide ?

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